Question?

Heya 2 whoevs is here sumhow. I wanna ask if i should put this first chapter of a fanfic i feel i will never finish cuz idk where its going next here so like someone can tell me what’s like wrong abt my writing or wat would make it better? Ok so cringe warning 4 sum ppl but u walked in on a fanfic category so u shoulda expected dat maybe… yea its a sukuna/reader fic OK DAS WAS SO HARD 2 SAY OML… im literally taking deep breaths tf…

Sry but like most of wat i read is dat stuff, it’s escapism ig but anyways- yea… uhh… should i like maybe put the privacy as js friends? If i actually ever finish the second chapter and put it here be4 ao3 it would be like beta reading lol… yea dat reminds me i did actually upload the first ver of dat fanfic (as in be4 the million years long editing it goes through every time i check mu notes) on ao3, and another fanfic 2- n then deleted them cuz like idk dude i dont like my writing its js not it. And i rly hate dat idk what will happen next- like why do i only know the first chapter and nothing of whats supposed 2 happen next or even a glimpse of an idea for the ending… is not knowing the reason why i deleted it?? Anyways this is too much yappidy yap im so sorry this was supposed 2 be a question… yea uh… yea might delete dis from the face of the earth laters sry 4 who suffered while reading ts