I NEED TIPS

Recently I thought about making a manga.. I literally don't know okay!!?
All I know that it's gonna be about two guys.. both are crossdressers and well they are both are my ocs (literally I only have 2 ocs)

One is Kirai he is actually a femboy
The second one (made before kirai) Is Light.. at first it was self insert. but I will call him an OC anyway.. he wasn't a crossdresser in my earlier drawings but he was just a shut in quiet guy that is into visual kei and wishes to go to a concert.. That was literally it

I kinda perfected my Art Style to the one I want.. it's kinda detailed because well one of them (which is Light) wears gothic lolita dresses which have a lot of details.. so it's really hard, I don't think If I even finished a one chapter I would publish it in a real Manga site I might just post it here or on Instagram.. I just need tips to make my art style stay how it is just through out drawing these few pages. I'm first trying to prefect the design of the characters so I still haven't really started fully on it but I started on how the few first pages would be going.. ▸ ִ ˑ

A shot of Light's messy empty bed, and then we see a really pale guy.. looks like he haven't got out in a while. he looks at himself in the mirror. he is not satisfied with the casual shorts and t-shirt he is wearing.. next day he ordered few things, which was some dresses and accessories, and then decided to cut his hair.. and when everything arrived it was perfect. it looked perfect, he decided that a happy day like this..he at least should try something new. he decided to go out, he was walking through the streets when someone noticed him.. Kirai, he figured out Light was also a cross dresser he went up to him tapped on his shoulder, Light was confused nervous and scared that it might be a mean person that would bully him. when he saw kirai, kirai looked so sweet and kind then kirai asked "Are you a crossdresser?" Light nodded, still a little nervous. then kirai says that he is also a cross dresser. Light didn't really notice because he was too focused on the scene itself rather than Kirai's feminine clothes - ▸ ִ ˑ

This is TWO pages bro. don't ask me how.. anyway PLEASE tell me your opinion and I will share more pictures of my one and only two precious ocs that have been there for more than a year now.. and yeah ig?? share ur opinion plz plz plz