Looks good. I can see a lot of potential in your work. If you have trouble making stories or make it sound believable I would suggest looking up on YouTube "writing advise from Matt stone". He's the creator of south park and he explains how you can tell stories in a believe able way so you don't have the feeling that things just happen because they did.

Hope my advise was of some help

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