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Visual Novel "The Cursed Ones"
Part 7, Final
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Navigating the space with ease, he came upon the glistening, unearthly water. It shone as if it was in the sunlight that couldn't reach this dark, damp place. The shimmering blue careened to the young prince as he stepped forth. Sinking into the water, he gently held the woman in his arms as he encased her in the spring. Slowly, a small trickle of light flowed forth. It swarmed the two of them, and began attaching itself to her body. Growing more. The sparkles of light became so numerous they were blinding, and the prince screwed his eyes shut, but the glow persisted as if he hadn't done so at all. A deep warmth, and a comforting chill circled around them in the water. Spinning, swirling, embracing them in a tingling sensation, it spread throughout their bodies and they went from being solid to becoming one with that dancing translucent shine. As darkness returned, a young woman opened her eyes again. Glancing around she truly wondered if this was the afterlife. A colorful place basked in darkness like this, with a glowing spring surrounding her. As she turned, a face greeted her. And thus began her true journey.
(It gets a little rushed at the end but this is a late night late night post XD)
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Oooohh i really like this premise! I'm absolutely fascinated and there's a lot of avenues and plot threads that are started off so i think your choice of medium is a really good fit! The title is also very interesting with the implications that there are other cursed ppl like clarice and the prince. I also just love your writing style, the imagery is so wonderfully vivid and you express clarice's emotions so well!! I'd love to see where u take this! <3 ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧
The main revolving characters for the visual novel is Clarice, Dante, and Fredrick-all cursed in their own ways. Clarice at birth(existence), Fredrick by blood(lineage), and Dante by "being"(His personality/thinking). I love breaking apart the characters in the story, their fears, their changes, growths, it's tons of fun ₍₍⚞(˶>ᗜ<˶)⚟⁾⁾